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Deep Dark Double Grave

Stale waters go deep.
Sneaky double mountain peaks,
Death environment



Inspired by Raul's Morning Ambience contest

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Date: 2/16/2010 7:37:00 PM

Good use of alliteration to convey your thoughts. Kind of a scary place to be. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2010 2:46:00 PM

Good luck for the contest dear friend..deep and dark indeed is this Haiku...good work..Charma

Constance La France

Date: 2/16/2010 2:42:00 PM

I like this very much, I thought the photo had a dark feel to it also.. and thank you so much for your comment on my poetry...keep the pen flowing, dear heart... Constance

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 12:10:00 PM

This should put you among the top in this contest...Good job my friend....:JP]

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2010 11:13:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup today Marty. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/16/2010 9:20:00 AM

Good Haiku, Marty! I wish you good luck in the contest! And thanks again for everything! Hope you got my e-mail.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 7:49:00 PM

OK .. luv this haiku also.. I just wrote Aura.. I think we are doing the same thing .. writing two Haiku's for the photo ..then trying to decide which to enter.. please read Aura .. then read Atmosphere again.. then give me your honest opinion as to which should be the entry.... thankxxx... I like your first one ..I like this one too.. not too much help for u... sorry.. luv them both.. go with your inner feelings about your entry ..luv.. and thankxxx for all your great comments tonight.. luv