Deep Confusion

Mind flutters in and out
Which sings and screams all about
Whatever thoughts have disappeared
Some remain and some are cleared

Sentiment of innocence forgotten now so long
Of what once was is no longer wrong
Scars of what once were tears
Left now like some forgotten fears

Distant times once so real
Begin to gently again steal
Happiness your great illusion
Leads you into deep confusion

Cluttered into your empty space
You leave without a single trace
Reminiscing of present sorrow
Now but soon to be lost tomorrow

Loathed among the liked sons
Whom are now just among
Simple minded weak but too strong
Feeble life not lived too long
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:20 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sean. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 6:00 AM
A poem with beautiful rhyming and expressions, Sean
Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 11:10 PM
Good descriptiveness and rhyming in each of the verses contained in this entry. Good job.
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