Deep Brown Eyes



Those deep brown eyes,
Reflecting the beauty of your soul!
That glimmered like a rain forest, old.
I see them now, reflecting the skies.

I knew you loved me, no surprise.
Those luscious lips, like honey sweet.
So intoxicating, a heavenly treat. 
Souls bound in no hidden disguise.

Poets will read this and say “romantic.”
They never saw the stars’ reflection in 
your sexy eyes.
Nor felt the warmth of your body and
thighs.
But stamping experiences it so pedantic!

You are a sparkling, sensitive soul.
A wise, cold, worldly, woman, I shall never be.
Because of the likes of the angelic, thee!
And expressing my feelings is always my
highest goal!


                            7/19/2021
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Mckay Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 4:29 PM
It is romantic but there is some "steam" for that certain someone!
Romios Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 4:56 PM
Madelyn..yaaa you got the message, hurrah. Steam is exact. Lime from a locomotive. Exactamundo! Pangie XXOO
Hinshaw Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Another wonderful poem from your very prolific and inspiring quill, Pangie. 'Tis as smooth as honey flowing slowly from a jar. Love it Bob H
Romios Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 4:53 PM
Love, love Your description. Bob, Compliment graciously accepted. Pangie XXOO
DiMino Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:11 AM
So, who wants to be sophisticated thus wise? Better to be young thus seeking no matter the age -- we all miss something in our journeys from there to now...and we are not the same persons. I guess, when people truly have love, it is not just loving thee for who you were and now are...but for what we have together become. Love never peaks for those who continue to reach for the stars. Lovely write, Pangie.
Romios Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 5:02 PM
Prince de Mino. I love your line....love never peeks, etc. much truth in that! Love does not end. Pangie xxoo
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Written for someone special , i hope they see. And yes, poets will think romantic :)
Romios Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 4:50 PM
How right you are, Eve. You know how grocery stores stamp USDA on beef? I just feel using romantic a way to not saying something specific about the poem, a phrase or a verse. Same as putting a STAR ON IT. It was a plea for specifity. I seem to be unable to communicate that. Perhaps ome day I will. Perhaps not. Maybe some one day, will hear me. Thanks, Pangie xxoo
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