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Deep Blue

Darkness cannot take your petals from me Blue notes written on my heart My indigo desires For the Blue Rose contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 12:15:00 AM
Very colourful and memorable poetry BG.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:02:00 AM
Soup mail in a moment, Barbara.
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:45:00 PM
Do not know that much about a contest,but did so enjoy reading the above write.Many things said with few words. Did truely enjoy the read. Take care,Gary.
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Date: 6/19/2010 2:27:00 PM
Great descriptive and expressive write that you have penned in this one..I like the second line especially..Sara
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:52:00 PM
VERY good, Barbara. Really like the "blue notes written on my heart." I'm sure this kimo will do well in the contest. I decided to post again and also have a contest going. Tomorrow I'm headed to NW Florida to see if I can help in the oil spill cleanup. I'll have my laptop and will stay in touch. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:25:00 AM
Great summary and poetic. Good Luck in the contest! Jeralynn
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Date: 6/18/2010 12:55:00 AM
Nice images conveying your thoughts on deep blue. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/18/2010 12:36:00 AM
this is absolutely brilliant! such simplicity yet such depth...thank you for sharing this..
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Date: 6/17/2010 11:38:00 PM
Another awesome write Barbara....good luck in the contest.....Larry
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Date: 6/17/2010 8:51:00 PM
lovely write, enjoyed and good luck on the contest..P.D.
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