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Deep Blue

Darkness cannot take your petals from me

Blue notes written on my heart

My indigo desires





For the Blue Rose contest

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Brian Strand

June 21, 2010 at 12:15 AM

Very colourful and memorable poetry BG.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

June 20, 2010 at 7:02 AM

Soup mail in a moment, Barbara.

Gary Bechter

June 19, 2010 at 11:45 PM

Do not know that much about a contest,but did so enjoy reading the above write.Many things said with few words. Did truely enjoy the read. Take care,Gary.

Sara Kendrick

June 19, 2010 at 2:27 PM

Great descriptive and expressive write that you have penned in this one..I like the second line especially..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

June 18, 2010 at 5:52 PM

VERY good, Barbara. Really like the "blue notes written on my heart." I'm sure this kimo will do well in the contest. I decided to post again and also have a contest going. Tomorrow I'm headed to NW Florida to see if I can help in the oil spill cleanup. I'll have my laptop and will stay in touch. Love, Carolyn