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Deep Beneath

... and when she touched me her fingers reached deep beneath my flesh, peeling back layers of the past, exposing a core once lost in the depths of fabled dreams to now understand that reality is the beauty it forever sought

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/5/2019 11:42:00 AM
wow amazing poem dear Chris, so deep and passionate :)-luloo
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Lu loo for you kind thoughts. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 9/5/2019 9:46:00 AM
Omg this was the most stunning piece I have read in such a long time! See it's posts like this that inspires others to try to reach for your inspiration and god I wish it could be bottled because my dear friend you could be a millionaire with the beauty that this inspires!!;) consider all who read this INSPIRED!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 10:15:00 AM
I am not even sure what to say to this humbling comment but thank you Brenda. This really made me smile this morning
Date: 9/5/2019 9:02:00 AM
My kind of gal.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 9:13:00 AM
That makes two of us. Thanks!
Date: 9/5/2019 3:43:00 AM
Romantic and passionate, you at your best Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth for your beautiful thoughts. You stopping by has made my day.
Date: 9/4/2019 6:57:00 PM
To think --- all that from a touch. Textured layers of profound beauty written here, my friend! Bravo! :) gw
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 6:53:00 AM
Thanks so very much Gershon. Always I appreciate your visits.
Date: 9/4/2019 5:20:00 PM
A real touch, a hot one, reaching into the true depths of passion — one that loves.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2019 6:54:00 PM
Same here :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Kim. Your comments always bring me happiness.
Date: 9/4/2019 4:49:00 PM
Wow. This is amazing. A favorite for sure. Smooth flowing, real and perfect. My kind of poetry :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, that really makes me smile I am thrilled you liked this one
Date: 9/4/2019 4:47:00 PM
your romantic poems cannot be topped, chris! just beautiful...
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 9/4/2019 4:33:00 PM
sounds like she touched your soul...the way you expressed this one is touching in itself and so beautiful... :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandy. Yes, this was a little deeper but it holds a certain meaning for me. I am happy you liked it.

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