Deep and Dark Poets

Let us be; we are fine.
Our hearts are broken,
and we do all cry;
we show our emotions in blood and metaphor;
you sit and smile at my sorrow,
then you ask if you can help me.

The smiles are fake, but the words are real!
I throw my sorrow on a thin, piece of paper and call it poetry,
while dotting my I's with tear drops.
We are all poets, some speak it;
others write it,
but we never forget it.

You call me a cry baby,
saying all I do is complain,
and you point out the flaws instead
of encouraging the good to come out and shine;
"Another teen suicide today"-Oh- I wonder why?
No one cares,
till you are packed in a box and put six feet under.
Break my heart when I'm alive and well,
and stich my heart back together with words of praise
when I'm dead and long gone.
Nothing left to show,
but a stone with a name and date that is covered by fog
and forgetful snow.

We are the modern day Romantics,
so break our hearts for if we cry and wonder,
it means our hearts are still beating.
Don't still my hand or his or hers,
for we all have something to share
that's worth hearing,
... someone just has to listen...

.1.29.2014.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/1/2014 3:58:00 PM
I can relate completely to every line and every word of this poem. I am often thought of as a "deep and dark" poet, but I am proud to be so. I feel that true poetry should be written from the heart and the soul. This poem was so well expressed, Chris. I enjoyed it very much, and this is a fav for me! :)
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Chris Boskovski
Date: 2/1/2014 5:12:00 PM
Well Kelly I am glad you enjoyed it and that it spoke to you and that it could relate to you. The best poetry comes deep from the heart, and a poet's job is to touch the hidden nerve deep in the heart and soul of the reader. I am glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking your time to read my poem! I also enjoy your poetry very much! :) xoxo
Date: 2/1/2014 4:27:00 AM
Powerful my friend! Love your raw truth and style, can't wait to go on to the next. In your second to last stanza I think you might have meant to say... "When I'm dead and LONG gone" it reads LONE if I caught a type o you may want to edit. My friends here help my with my typos and grammatical errors too.
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Chris Boskovski
Date: 2/1/2014 3:22:00 PM
Hi Sarai, it's good to see another comment from you. Feel free to read all my poems if you want, I'd do the same with you! :) and thank you for the help, it was a mistake! Thank you Sarai! :) xoxo Thanks for the read.
Date: 1/31/2014 5:00:00 PM
Chris Such a true and very honest write. Poets and writers pour out their hearts and soul onto paper for others to read. Good or bad, its nice to put our feelings out there. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Cherished Love poem
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Date: 2/1/2014 3:23:00 PM
Hi Robin, I'm glad you understood the power and honesty behind the words! Thanks for the read Robin! :) xoxo
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