Deep and Dark

Deep and Dark
                               
          My hankering for you, my longing for you, 
           my desire for you
          do not allow my thirsty eyes to close the lid.
            My aspiration for you, my delight for you,
               my earnest zeal for you
               always occupy my mind.
             But how do you feel? 
                   I am in dark still.

         To listen to your voice, to respond to your call
               to reciprocate your say
              my eager ears are alert.
        My emotion for you, my feelings for you,
                  my passion for you
            ooze from the core of my heart.
               But how do you feel? 
                   I am in dark still.

        My tension for you, my stress for you
                my worries for you
           do not give rest to my brain.
          To know your mind, to pierce through your heart
                  to perceive your urge
             my pulse beats are always in strain.
                    But how do you feel? 
                       I am in dark still.

          My grief for you, my sorrow for you,
                      my pain for you
              opt for your soft gentle touch.
                Just one glance, a little smile,
                       Just a simple ‘Hi’!
                        I won’t expect much.
                        But how do you feel? 
                          I am in dark still.

                      My love for you 
                  analyzed by my brain,
                    felt in my heart,
                and defined in my mind
              is released through my soul.
                  I could not control.
                 But how do you feel? 
                       I am in dark still.

             Neither brain, nor mind
              neither heart nor soul
              can't have any explanation.
                You are beyond my guess
                 My brain, heart, mind 
                  or soul can’t express.
                    But how do you feel? 
                       I am in dark still.

  12/26/15

                   Deep and Dark Contest     Sixth Place
    Sponsor Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:06 PM
thank you for the reply to my comment. you are welcome
A   Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:09 PM
AWESOME WIN............LINDA
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Thanks Linda. Hugs. Anisha D
Kimathi Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:16 AM
Congrats Anisha, for your placement in the contest! ;-)
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Thanks Teddy. Happy New Year. nisha D
A  Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Anisha, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Thanks SKAT.
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Well done, Anisha, Congratulations.
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Thanks Lin. Best Wishes.
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win!
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Thanks Eve. Hugs.
Inman Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Exasperating feeling always wondering where you stand in a relationship. Meaningful poem, Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Thanks James.
Sage Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 3:48 PM
nice poem Anisha, excellently written...
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Thanks White
Fleming Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:03 PM
Yes! The dark prison of the mind - The darkest, most desperate prison of them all! Nicely penned....And a merry Christmas, Anisha! My very best regards! :) john
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Thanks John n BestvWishes for New Year. Anisha D
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