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Staring into space. The zone;a temporary place. Creates chills up and down spines, cheering, amongst strangers, lifting arms in praise, someone please explain it all, is it just a phase?? DEEP. If you have ever been there, you know the place in which I speak, makes you go beyond wonder, to a place of belief. DEEP. Like the oceans, waterways to the soul, teardrops, one can never hold, totally out of control. All awhile; while you weep. DEEP. Influencing to take one to the the next level, to achieve, and concieve. DEEP.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/27/2012 2:17:00 PM
Sounds like some super meditation. Lend us the mantra please. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Jesu Johnson
Date: 4/27/2012 4:00:00 PM
Thank YOU!!! Daver, LOL, you are truly appreciated for your response. Thanks for taking the time to read mine!!!
Date: 4/27/2012 8:54:00 AM
Lovely Jesu!! Well thought, provoking the mind to stop and think, yes, for a while!! Do keep on writing my friend... Love Diana
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Jesu Johnson
Date: 4/27/2012 9:18:00 AM
Thank You for your kind comments. I'll try to keep writing if you keep granting wonderful comments like this!!!!!

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