Deep

There are people like us who will leave
without traces: a shadow
passing the untrained eye. 
 
Look up there! Yes, I think you know
what I mean. Do not be afraid of your own
reflection. No it isn't, it is you.
 
The fishes are wide eyed wondering
what you are thinking, lying in here
naked. The shells are crowning 
you now, oysters, mussels, sea cucumbers
 
and a red anemone at your navel.
An intrusion to the corallic world. There your body
 
up there in a battered boat called love
and life and living and loving and other things.
hahahaha....yes it is a mystery how 
that boat with a hole could not sink
but you did.
 
Can you hear me? Sound travels
faster in water so I heard. Deep
down there I can hear 
 
you but I am saddened by you
and your constant effort to escape
this calling, these
 
lines.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 3:50 PM
Julius - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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February 24, 2009 at 7:04 AM
Congrats Julius on the featuring of "Deep." Vince
Payne Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 8:03 AM
wow this was awesome this is rich with meaning, I really like the title. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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