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Dedication In Silhouette

i remember when you saw me in the devil's tattered and torn the flinch was the pinch and i felt the tinge at every inch my innermost persperation was inspiring convulsing chills as a merciless foe i remember when you saw me in the devil's forgotten and forlorn i recall the melancholy raindrops expressing the truth through the feeble theatrics of my acidic lie the shake was a flake so easily exposed by the obviously expressive ache my external mannequin was so horribly frostbitten by the flop of the frigid show i recall the most brutally honest eye talk within the very heart of the most avoidable senselessness gone terribly awry if i had the antidote to dissolve and dissipate, i definately would not hesitate to burn the milky white nucleus of your incomprehensible hate that makes me melt in your memory in an altered state of wait a black snowflake falls, and i find myelf wanting you a white hailstone crashes, and i see myself flaunting you an indecisive sun teases, and i forsee myself haunting you a disappointed moon cries itself fuseless, and in the blind stillness of this remaining actuality, I....AM....SO....STILL....LONGING....YOU!!!!

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Date: 12/26/2013 8:01:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Marty ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:08:00 PM
Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Marty Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, love the title !! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Marty King
Date: 4/2/2014 9:52:00 AM
Skat, thank you for the comment.
Date: 12/24/2013 11:36:00 PM
deep provoking ending, Marty, . , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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