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Decompression of the heart

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The absence of love plays on my mind,
I search within, but love, I cannot find.

Another wasted day, just frittered away.
Can't bring myself to see, it's all because of me!

Dark clouds are moving in, my soul's screaming out.
There's no place I wish to be, my mind consumed with doubt.

My body's numb, this pain has won,
As I lift my pen to write again,
these words flood out before my eyes.
It's not until then that I realise!
That all my struggles are not my demise,

and all my woes as far as a poet goes,
For now, a smile creeps on my face.
Finally, I have found that loving place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/16/2019 11:50:00 PM
great write, love it
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Date: 10/20/2018 11:29:00 AM
This is great and I love the ending :)
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Date: 10/17/2018 5:35:00 PM
It all begins within, if we don't find it there, we can't find it anywhere, I have enjoyed your heart felt poem this evening. Thank you WW
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Date: 10/9/2018 7:32:00 AM
I luvd it , i missed this part of you , :)
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Date: 10/7/2018 8:58:00 AM
Wolf......Yes!! Your pen is mightier than your pain! A FAV!
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Date: 10/6/2018 11:35:00 PM
I love this
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Date: 10/4/2018 4:40:00 PM
Deep personal poem my friend.. has 14 lines, so could have been a sonnet... Glad you have found that loving place, it normally does come from expressing yourself..
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Date: 10/3/2018 11:18:00 PM
This goes to show is quality not quantity, loved this one!
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Date: 10/3/2018 10:40:00 PM
Hmmm :) I really like this. xomo
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