Deck the Hall

Deck The Halls
  
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                                                                     On
                                                               Christmas 
                                                    carols echoed in the hall
                                            Merriment and celebratory mood 
                                   put us all in swinging gaiety with the singers
                          We sang with the choristers at the midnight mass with 
                                                        clanging cymbals
                                                Past sorrows were shut out 
                                           Our neighbourers exuberant faces 
                                 warmed our blood by forgiving and forgetting 
                         the spears and barbs of the dead days as bygone stories
                                                         Zealously we were 
                                               spreading happiness of sharing 
                                         in  the lonely world of the less fortunate 
                            by becoming the forerunners of our benevolent Santa Claus
                     making a toy land of the homeless and joy land of our parched souls
                                                       We at sixteen each
                                                       held   lit    candles 
                                                       decking  our  lives 
                                                       with unfortunate 
                                                       Carols and candles
                                                       chorused unknown
                                                       into  the   unknown

                                     Contest : Christmas Carols- Deck  The Hall

                                          Sponsor:        Kelly           Deschler

                                                  December     15,     2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/7/2016 11:09:00 PM
BALVEEN, Congrats on your Christmas win. ~LINDA~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/7/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/4/2016 9:23:00 PM
Balveen, love the shape congratulations on your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/4/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thanks Eve and wish you a healthy and fulfilled year!
Date: 1/4/2016 10:46:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your Christmas Carol. SKAT :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/4/2016 9:51:00 PM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 1/3/2016 4:04:00 PM
so creative Balveen! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/4/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Jan! Santa made me do it! Lol! Love...
Date: 1/3/2016 2:28:00 PM
A very creative poem and a unique interpretation of the song, Deck The Halls... Nice work, Balveen! Congrats on a win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/4/2016 11:47:00 AM
Hi Kelly! Thanks for your visit and appreciation!
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