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Decisions Decisions

to what shall i spend this pen and ink to love and all it's facets excitment and sweet to history the brave the honorable deceaced to seasons the four cycles compleat to life and it's pleasures and pains and death the ultimate failure distained to family the irriplacible kin and sometimes foes to the glory of sports and the honor of heros to what higher levels ambitions let us climb to hidden secrets our minds allow us to find i'm running out of ink just trying to decide

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/20/2009 12:43:00 PM

Well, what you wrote looks fine to me! Good thing too, being almost out of ink and all! Great write, John. The first 2 lines are brilliant! Love, Robin

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/1/2008 1:46:00 PM

Great write John. God Bless Phyl

Daver Austin

Date: 9/22/2008 6:24:00 AM

This is a poet's natural state when he as at his peak of inspiration. Seems like the entire wealth of conditions are a possibility. Good write. Love, Daver

Brian Strand

Date: 9/14/2008 11:59:00 PM

Nice work here john.rgds Brian & thanks for your welcom comments

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/14/2008 4:01:00 PM

Whatever you decide, it will be written well. God Bless! Vince

Deneen White

Date: 9/14/2008 3:37:00 PM

hi John I love the flow of this write and the way that it comes together, awesome, and thanks for your kind and warm words, I really appreciate it, take care Deneen

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/14/2008 1:11:00 PM

John - Sometimes it is hard to decide what it is we wish to say - Very well done and just a wonderful ending - God Bless

Sara Zahed

Date: 9/14/2008 9:14:00 AM

A lovely poem. Indeed ink may run out yet words never fade out...loved it...Sara...

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/14/2008 9:04:00 AM

Think you covered everything. Actually ended up being great! Love the humor in the last two lines. Thanks for the smile. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 9/14/2008 6:28:00 AM

Hi, John. I love this one....kind of in the style of Pope, though brought very much up to date. Yep! Sometimes you sit down and think about what to write, end up writing about what to write about. Very well put together. Love, Daver

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/14/2008 6:13:00 AM

Wow! A fabulous poem. Inks may draw out, but the subjects to write on are inexhaustible. Great! You may like to correct some printer's devils. I don't know if you have read my poem The Paint Brush. Spare a little time and read it. I am sure you will enjoy the poem. Thanks for admiring my poem The Sound of Silence. I am glad it caught the attention of your discerning eyes.