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Decisions Is it fun are you enjoying the reads ? Or is it difficult and you get tired ? Is it hard to choose which will succeed ? Or easy to find which one one you desired ? Are there people writing way off the mark ? Are their syllables often counted wrong ? Do some of the writings just have that spark ? Or are there some you can't follow along ? What if you find the best one at the first ? And the rest of them don't seem to compare ? Maybe your torn, you like only one verse Or some are just full of too much despair Its a lot of work, with not many thanks It's appreciated, thanks for the chance ! August 25, 2016

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Date: 8/26/2016 9:34:00 AM
Great fun sonnet Tanis - you need to check over lines 3 and 4 of the first stanza - each line needs to be 10 syllables - Line 4 has one repeated. You have soup mail turned off otherwise I would have mailed you hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2016 10:27:00 PM
Tanis, love the write all of the above , but a great joy of enjoying every ones work. I read them a few times . I also not only use the Soup syllable counter, but also how many syllable website to make sure which you used , 10 all the way down the 14lines . Then the rhyme pattern. That's why I ask everyone to make sure they have the correct count. Thank you so much Hugs Eve
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