Tanis Troutman Poet Sonnet

Decisions

Decisions

Is it fun are you enjoying the reads ?
Or is it difficult and you get tired ?
Is it hard to choose which will succeed ?
Or easy to find which one one you desired ?

Are there people writing way off the mark ?
Are their syllables often counted wrong ?
Do some of the writings just have that spark ? 
Or are there some you can't follow along ?

What if you find the best one at the first ?
And the rest of them don't seem to compare ?
Maybe your torn, you like only one verse
Or some are just full of too much despair

Its a lot of work, with not many thanks
It's appreciated, thanks for the chance !


August 25, 2016

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Jan Allison August 26, 2016 at 9:34 AM Great fun sonnet Tanis - you need to check over lines 3 and 4 of the first stanza - each line needs to be 10 syllables - Line 4 has one repeated. You have soup mail turned off otherwise I would have mailed you hugs jan xx

Eve Roper August 25, 2016 at 10:27 PM Tanis, love the write all of the above , but a great joy of enjoying every ones work. I read them a few times . I also not only use the Soup syllable counter, but also how many syllable website to make sure which you used , 10 all the way down the 14lines . Then the rhyme pattern. That's why I ask everyone to make sure they have the correct count. Thank you so much Hugs Eve