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He stood on the edge and took a breath of life The pain of existence cut his heart like a knife Yet the panorama before him gilded with gold Perhaps he had a story that still could be told.... Barbara Gorelick 9/21/15 Four Line Contest

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Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 9:52:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**

Estela Canama

Date: 9/28/2015 3:25:00 AM

A very meaningful poem! Congrats, Barbara.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2015 5:49:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/24/2015 11:47:00 PM

Wonderful expressions Sara ! Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2015 3:35:00 PM

I like how you ended this on an unsure note! Congrats for your win.

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/24/2015 7:51:00 AM

I really like it, your ink flowed in a great rhythm with a dark beat, grats on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2015 6:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Barbara. Hugs Eve

James Inman

Date: 9/23/2015 12:13:00 PM

Barbara, I like your write. A positive twist. Sounds like a little hope.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/22/2015 5:43:00 PM

I like your entry a great deal, it is both creative and dramatic ... CayCay

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/22/2015 5:50:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by..lovely comment..BG

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2015 5:32:00 PM

deep and sad Barbara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/22/2015 5:51:00 PM

Thank you Jan...appreciate your stopping by with such positive comments. BG