Barbara Gorelick Poet Rhyme

Decisions

He stood on the edge and took a breath of life
The pain of existence cut his heart like a knife
Yet the panorama before him gilded with gold 
Perhaps he had a story that still could be told....


Barbara Gorelick
9/21/15
Four Line Contest

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Skat A September 28, 2015 at 9:52 PM Barbara, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**

Estela Canama September 28, 2015 at 3:25 AM A very meaningful poem! Congrats, Barbara.

Jan Allison September 26, 2015 at 5:49 PM Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 24, 2015 at 11:47 PM Wonderful expressions Sara ! Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2015 at 3:35 PM I like how you ended this on an unsure note! Congrats for your win.

Casarah Nance September 24, 2015 at 7:51 AM I really like it, your ink flowed in a great rhythm with a dark beat, grats on your win!

Eve Roper September 23, 2015 at 6:30 PM Congratulations on your win, Barbara. Hugs Eve

James Inman September 23, 2015 at 12:13 PM Barbara, I like your write. A positive twist. Sounds like a little hope.

CayCay Godwin September 22, 2015 at 5:43 PM I like your entry a great deal, it is both creative and dramatic ... CayCay Barbara Gorelick September 22, 2015 at 5:50 PM Thank you for stopping by..lovely comment..BG

Jan Allison September 21, 2015 at 5:32 PM deep and sad Barbara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Barbara Gorelick September 22, 2015 at 5:51 PM Thank you Jan...appreciate your stopping by with such positive comments. BG