Deciduous

Deciduous 

At a private party one rusting noon,
Green elm trees reveled with summer on its bier,
Gaily rousing a drowsy lagoon.
Some bathed their beak-scarred barks, those on the pier
Appeared to beckon birds come for songful fun;
For this they from the grave forest did run.

But soon their blades shall be bled, as
Amber leaves wring from brittle, weary boughs,
A purging of passions their hearts did house.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 19, 2017 at 3:30 PM
I agree with Chris your style is somewhat different...But very appealing! Nicely thought out and composed! All my very best, P.L...And my warmest regards! :) john
Green Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Very creative and definitely painted a picture for the mind to gaze upon. I like the feel of this, your style is quite different but definitely enticing. Nicely done
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November 25, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Thanks a million, Chris.
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