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Deciduous At a private party one rusting noon, Green elm trees reveled with summer on its bier, Gaily rousing a drowsy lagoon. Some bathed their beak-scarred barks, those on the pier Appeared to beckon birds come for songful fun; For this they from the grave forest did run. But soon their blades shall be bled, as Amber leaves wring from brittle, weary boughs, A purging of passions their hearts did house.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/19/2017 3:30:00 PM
I agree with Chris your style is somewhat different...But very appealing! Nicely thought out and composed! All my very best, P.L...And my warmest regards! :) john
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Date: 11/25/2016 1:09:00 PM
Very creative and definitely painted a picture for the mind to gaze upon. I like the feel of this, your style is quite different but definitely enticing. Nicely done
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Pariah Love
Date: 11/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks a million, Chris.

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