DECIDUOUS

I have shed the foliage of youth Grown taller …sunk my roots …deeply …into an everchanging …now

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Heidi Sands

Date: 8/22/2024 3:39:00 PM

Great one ! A Fave for me :)

Lin Lane

Date: 8/22/2024 10:28:00 AM

What a terrific first line, John!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/22/2024 2:04:00 AM

What a deeply meaningful poem. How youv overcome so much and grown so much youv expressed in few syllables! Brilliant! Love how youv depicted this word and delivered it. Sending you light always

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/21/2024 7:35:00 AM

Hello John, how insightful and a wonderful read for we are ever-changing in each and every moment. I hope you do well in the contest. Powerful! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/20/2024 12:04:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your very creative Monoku write. Have a fun day writing away...........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2024 6:16:00 AM

LOve love love this! Well spent words! A fave!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/20/2024 6:06:00 AM

Ooh you brave soul. Entering a Craigzy contest? He's a tough sponsor. He might like this one I'm thinking. For Craig less is more