Deception of Love

If you like someone for their looks 
then it's shallow.
If you try to find love where there isnt
Then it's hollow.
If you try to create something
That doesnt exist.
It's going to backfire 
Because only you insist.
When you like someone 
With all your heart
Then it's a start
Of something bizarre.
And that's not shallow, hollow, rough
I think that's called love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Anderson Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 6:06 AM
Amy, very nice. True words. You did a good job on this keep it up! Take care.
Thajudeen Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:50 PM
Interesting to read the human nature.Wishes dear poet Amy. -Safa
Kong Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Thank you. :)
Kong Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Thank you. :)
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