Deception of Breakage

Broken hearts, but fixed faces.
                                        No scares on outer appearance.
                                           scares and dim stars within.
                                              Peace on the outside,
                                                   but war within.
                             You never truly seen the home,until you walk in.
                                 Glass broken in every room,while pretty
                                decorations outside,leaving you to assume.
                                                
                                      Any home might need a good broom.
                                      Until you walk in please don't assume.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/7/2012 7:16:00 PM
Excellent write and insight!
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Date: 5/7/2012 3:56:00 PM
Yes, in the home as well as on the face one can't know until they enter..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:46:00 PM
This Elliott is the best yet...I have to fave this one...Well Done...Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:17:00 AM
so true, so sadly true, Elliot!
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Date: 5/7/2012 5:56:00 AM
I agree with the other two poets Elliott!! Good looking out!!
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Date: 5/7/2012 3:23:00 AM
Very good poem on life.Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:44:00 AM
brilliant poem, Elliot, life is only skin deep and you bring this out so well. enjoyed. harry
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