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Deception In Soup Creek There once was a town called Soup Creek amiable and quaint Filled with all these characters, a perfect picture they'd paint It was founded to protect the innocent Where one was welcome to come visit A bold western saga exquisite A Mayor, a Sheriff, a saloon proprietor A bar owner, also a realtor What comes next you can’t make it up, is true A charlatan Sheriff who already knew The saloon owner was a phony too This is the tale what we thought a young fem, Claimed she was being stalked by men who used different user names All the while she was doing the same Many here feel used by her deception Manipulated for her own protection Even I was dragged in To keep the adventure going I was a bit overzealous Got a vibe she was jealous Cause I added a twist And then there’s this… Whose face is it? Someone off the internet Identity theft is what I saw Or is madam above the law I uncovered a foul devious charade Just ego and hubris on parade Meanwhile she had Told a few folks who also were played Madam’s her old self, and is back With fists ready to attack Writing about the value of friends Pshaw, a victim again, it never ends I don’t have the time for this I’ll give it to you quick, Ma`am, Miss What were you thinking, is it mental illness? Tell the saloon owner, who invites us in for a drink What in heavens name would Milton think? I know I should move on gracefully But it just didn't settle right with me If lies and deception are your lot At least you can try better not to get caught

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Date: 5/16/2023 5:50:00 PM
This a very underhanded way to behave.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/16/2023 5:55:00 PM
Dear Robert, what's really sad. She had been elated with all the attention she was getting, when trying to get the Dingo kicked off... she got kicked off, then, she used it as an excuse.
Date: 5/13/2023 5:23:00 AM
Does this mean Jenna will no longer be writing ,unless a new one arises
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/17/2023 12:30:00 AM
I'm afraid that's not the case Anaya, the Creek story came about because a certain individual returned and was stirring the soup bowl. I was protecting no one. Tom
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/13/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thanks for your concern Stephan. Soup Creek was invented by Tom Cunningham to protect the poetess, she who claimed of being stalked by guys, she is a creation of an elder poetess here. Not too many knew this, not even Tom. A sad hoax!. We'll see what Tom decides to do.
Date: 5/3/2023 12:22:00 AM
Well I'll admit it came as a bit of a shock but I think it's best that all concerned try and put it behind us and move on, I know some might struggle to accept it but lifes too short to bear grudges and what's done is done. PS is not a battleground and we should use it to read and write poetry. By the way it's Milton Creek not Soup Creek lol. Tom
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/17/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Sir Tom for keeping us posted. Be Well!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/3/2023 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Tom, I agree! I'm moving on to the friends I left behind! The tides which ebbed, now freely to more friendly and welcoming shores— let us celebrate together on the warm sands of friendship—Anaya :)
Date: 5/2/2023 1:16:00 PM
Anaya, I have made choices that I felt I had to make at the time. Folk didn't understand why I did. I'm not perfect ( no one is). With that being said, I see why you are frustrated, but we all must give each other a bit more grace and not judge. Try to gain an understanding and in turn, show support. PS, this site is primarily about poetry. Writing it and sharing. I try to stay away from drama. I have too much drama in real life-Alexis
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2023 2:01:00 PM
Dear Alexis, yes, that's all I have done is shown support, I will not judge anyone, I promise! Let's learn more type forms, I'm all in. I love PS. It is a warm and caring place!
Date: 5/2/2023 11:45:00 AM
Brilliant write.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2023 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! A gifted membership unknowingly? She otta be ashamed!
Date: 5/2/2023 11:02:00 AM
wow! this whole thing is so confusing to me, anaya! i was unaware of all this as it was going on and only recently found out a tiny part of it, but it has obviously affected you very deeply and you've expressed your frustration very well. i don't know what to think. i guess it's better to just stick to reading the poems without knowing the drama behind them...
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2023 12:26:00 PM
Me too, Ilene, I was going over the details, and although it doesn't make me feel any better, it's a message I must send off., I left a few friends here because of her deception. It's an opportunity to rekindle friendships I left behind. I will move on of course and write pieces on my autobiography.

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