Deception

Can you realize, realize the things around you,
the transformations that has been made around you ,
the mosquito's suck your blood with out you realizing,
until you itch,are you sure you realize the things around you,
the things that surrounds you, are those mosquito's 
vampires?those ants are very little, small,
we need to magnify them, there so small,they take from 
our picnic with out notice we need to focus,the key of war
is deception sharpen you perception, are those ants your
friends using deception,are you sure you realize the things 
around you,the things that surrounds you,be aware of the 
things that surrounds you,or else doom will crown you
and deception will circle around you and drown you in the waters
of your weak perception, becoming a easy target  for your enemy,
I am a united states citizen with all of the malice here 
I was taught natural to be aware, this is a message to be aware,
and maybe this message will save a tear,more people 
may escape deceptions lair, words of wisdom before this 
poem ends watch closely the image of your friends,
listen my poet friends, (evil laugh)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/13/2012 11:48:00 AM
ha ha ha thank you dear friend and I promise I will be aware,I will pay attention as you say,thank you f or this lovely poem,Ivy
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Date: 5/13/2012 9:52:00 AM
Hi Elliott, Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD
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Date: 5/12/2012 11:29:00 PM
Smile ˜ Yessss, My Dear Precious Priceless Elliot * Tis Good To Try & Always Be Aware For One Never Knows When They May Find A Jewel Of Blessing ˜ As For A Blood Sucking Enemy Per Se *.* All I Have To Do Is Try & Force Myself To Gaze Head On Into The Mirror & I Shall Find My Worst Advesary Of They All; Mr. Hyde *,* My Love to You, Forever; John!:) ˜
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