Deception

Look into a liars eyes...
bleeding locked up failures
Unwilling to fathom compromise
A falseness stays in layers...

Keeping truth safe inside
A liars lie needs one to cover
Misinterpretating a landslide
Wait a bit ...uncover another

Liar Liar you'll always be
Telling lies comes easy to you
Justifying your harmony
Pittiful is me..I want truth!

angstquatrain

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Keith Bickerstaffe

March 22, 2009 at 11:20 AM

Sorry... I guess you meant to spell 'em that way.

Christopher Higgins

March 19, 2009 at 4:33 AM

This is well written my friend..love the second stanza...misinterpretating a landslide...very good line...thanks for the comments on my work..greatly appreciated.

John Rhinem

March 17, 2009 at 8:34 AM

I would not say that pitiful is the wanting of truth! And yes, liars always need another lie to cover up their last! Not a very pleasant cycle to find oneself within; for all concerned I would say! And definately, not a pretty picture within the eyes Heaven!! I hope that you are doing well my dear friend Janey!? Loved your message here dear! My love always to you and your loves, john!:) Have a beautiful day dear~bye!:)

Keith Bickerstaffe

March 16, 2009 at 8:39 PM

I wish I could write free verse like you!

Keith Bickerstaffe

March 16, 2009 at 8:25 PM

(sp. misinterpreting, pitiful) Some fine phrasing here... neat quatrains with cool rhyming and flow. Well done Jane! Best wishes, Keith

Lena Townsend

March 15, 2009 at 10:09 PM

Wonderful rhyme and flow! I agree with Kristen on this one! The truth SHOULD be held in the highest regard in all of our lives. Without truth there is no trust without trust there is no love without love there is no life. That is my opinion anyway! Great write, this one will get the readers all stirred up! Smiles from Lolita