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Deception

your eyes betrayed you
it was there in the fine print
chance another look

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07/12/2018

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David Byrne

Date: 1/8/2019 6:19:00 PM

Been reading many of your poems here this morning, you are a good writer.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/9/2019 11:37:00 AM

Thank you David...

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win! That fine print... Clever.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/6/2018 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Susan...

Eve Roper

Date: 8/6/2018 2:12:00 AM

Nicely done, Charlie, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/6/2018 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Eve...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/5/2018 7:01:00 AM

Congrats, Charlie! Excellent!

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/5/2018 11:01:00 AM

Thanks Kim...

Charles Messina

Date: 8/4/2018 8:31:00 AM

Always take a second look Congrats on your top win, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Charles...

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/4/2018 12:43:00 AM

cool point - good winner.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2018 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Virginia...

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/3/2018 10:03:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Charlie, with your witty senryu.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2018 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Line...

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/3/2018 6:49:00 PM

Yes, those eyes tell all, Charlie! A good one! Congrats on your First Place win. Sandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2018 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Sandra...

Kevin Shaw

Date: 8/3/2018 4:11:00 PM

Ah yes Charlie, the "fine print" speaking of which your winning Senryu is also fine print, well done, regards, Kevin

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2018 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Kevin...

Mark Toney

Date: 8/3/2018 2:41:00 PM

Charlie, congratulations on your first place win! So much said in so few words :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/3/2018 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Mark...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 2:33:00 PM

very good. Sometimes taking a second look is very valuable. CONGRATS

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/3/2018 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/3/2018 2:06:00 PM

Good one, Charlie! Congrats. Janice

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/3/2018 3:31:00 PM

Thank you Janice...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 8/3/2018 11:55:00 AM

Oh SO good! Another fine win dear Poet! All the best :) xomo

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/3/2018 12:03:00 PM

Thank you Maureen...

Anil Deo

Date: 7/28/2018 3:50:00 AM

The fine print ... Ah yes, always the fine print. But it is called FINE for a good reason. Thanks much Charlie, and second looks & chances are what's it is all about. shalom, shalom THY Peace brother Man

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/28/2018 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Anil...