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Deception

your eyes betrayed you
it was there in the fine print
chance another look

Senryu Contest
Sponsored by Mick Talbot
07/12/2018

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David Byrne

January 8, 2019 at 6:19 PM

Been reading many of your poems here this morning, you are a good writer.

Charlie Smith

January 9, 2019 at 11:37 AM

Thank you David...

Susan Gentry

August 6, 2018 at 10:24 AM

Congratulations on your top win! That fine print... Clever.

Charlie Smith

August 6, 2018 at 11:03 AM

Thank you Susan...

Eve Roper

August 6, 2018 at 2:12 AM

Nicely done, Charlie, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Charlie Smith

August 6, 2018 at 11:03 AM

Thank you Eve...

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2018 at 7:01 AM

Congrats, Charlie! Excellent!

Charlie Smith

August 5, 2018 at 11:01 AM

Thanks Kim...

Charles Messina

August 4, 2018 at 8:31 AM

Always take a second look Congrats on your top win, Charlie!

Charlie Smith

August 4, 2018 at 10:48 AM

Thank you Charles...

Virginia Waters

August 4, 2018 at 12:43 AM

cool point - good winner.

Charlie Smith

August 4, 2018 at 10:42 AM

Thanks Virginia...

Line Gauthier

August 3, 2018 at 10:03 PM

Congrats on your top win, Charlie, with your witty senryu.

Charlie Smith

August 4, 2018 at 10:33 AM

Thank you Line...

Sandra Haight

August 3, 2018 at 6:49 PM

Yes, those eyes tell all, Charlie! A good one! Congrats on your First Place win. Sandra

Charlie Smith

August 4, 2018 at 10:28 AM

Thank you Sandra...

Kevin Shaw

August 3, 2018 at 4:11 PM

Ah yes Charlie, the "fine print" speaking of which your winning Senryu is also fine print, well done, regards, Kevin

Charlie Smith

August 4, 2018 at 10:20 AM

Thank you Kevin...

Mark Toney

August 3, 2018 at 2:41 PM

Charlie, congratulations on your first place win! So much said in so few words :)

Charlie Smith

August 3, 2018 at 3:32 PM

Thank you Mark...

Andrea Dietrich

August 3, 2018 at 2:33 PM

very good. Sometimes taking a second look is very valuable. CONGRATS

Charlie Smith

August 3, 2018 at 3:32 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Janice Canerdy

August 3, 2018 at 2:06 PM

Good one, Charlie! Congrats. Janice

Charlie Smith

August 3, 2018 at 3:31 PM

Thank you Janice...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 3, 2018 at 11:55 AM

Oh SO good! Another fine win dear Poet! All the best :) xomo

Charlie Smith

August 3, 2018 at 12:03 PM

Thank you Maureen...

Anil Deo

July 28, 2018 at 3:50 AM

The fine print ... Ah yes, always the fine print. But it is called FINE for a good reason. Thanks much Charlie, and second looks & chances are what's it is all about. shalom, shalom THY Peace brother Man

Charlie Smith

July 28, 2018 at 9:32 AM

Thanks Anil...