December Sun

The December sun sets among the gray skies
The snow falls down on the ground feeding my eyes
The ending of such a lazy day all alone with snow and sun
The waking of this cool day in the middle of nowhere has just begun
The sweater i wear is a resting place for the the snowflakes
The children laugh as they glide and smile over the frozen lakes
The day has once again ended on such a lonely note
The words i have written and the poem i have wrote
The hopes of it being read for those alone
The ones that spends their days at home
Watching the endless fun
and the setting of the December Sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rider Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 9:51 AM
Beautiful imagery here. So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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September 11, 2009 at 6:29 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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September 8, 2009 at 6:14 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Jordan Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:36 PM
Autumn - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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September 8, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Autumn, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 8, 2009 at 9:39 AM
This is a well rwitten poem of a beautiful place, a lovely time of the year, but depicting such a lonely person, best wishes---Norman
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September 7, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Autumn *xx*>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Autumn. Love, Carol
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September 7, 2009 at 6:10 AM
Autumn,..congratulations on your beautiful poem being featured this week ! How I long for those cold snowy days ! james
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September 7, 2009 at 12:02 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Autumn.Rgds Brian
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August 27, 2009 at 6:05 AM
Another wonderful write Autumn, thank you for sharing this lovely poem>>James
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August 24, 2009 at 12:28 PM
The summer is coming to a close already. You capture the spirit of winter in your poem. Reminds me of the song "Circle Game" - it was written either by Joni Mitchell of Buffy St. Marie. Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish
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August 23, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Nice use of imagery for an uplifting view. Keep that hope alive. And keep on writing! Karen
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August 23, 2009 at 12:42 PM
You bring back such delightful memories, Autumn. Though I now life in FL, I grew up in NJ and dodged the snowflakes as I skated on the frozen lakes until dusk. Absoultely beautiful, rich in imagery and a great rhyme too! Love, Carolyn
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