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December Magic

Frost crisped, the lawn remained
beneath the frozen dew.
Water dripped to ice as gutters drained.
The cardinal bids the day adieu;
the winter storm has left a gelid view.

naturequintain (english)

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Matthew Anish

December 8, 2018 at 8:35 PM

Fine seasonal poem. What does gelid mean? I have been published in the NY Times. Also, I remember what you wrote about there being some good people out there. In light of recent events my faith in that has been a bit shattered. Also a great nature photo! I wish the best of the season to you and yours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Guzzi

December 9, 2018 at 2:43 PM

very impressive getting into the NY Times!!!! Happy Holy Days Matt

Eve Roper

July 28, 2017 at 4:30 PM

beautiful imagery, Debbie, leaving a slight chill ~*

Thomas Martin

August 21, 2015 at 5:15 PM

Enjoyed this quintaine example! Excellent expression and imagery

Bl Devnath

January 16, 2015 at 9:32 AM

Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Verlena S. Walker

January 10, 2015 at 3:38 PM

Congratulations on your win Debbie. Another beautiful write enjoyed... Verlena

Roy Jerden

January 7, 2015 at 8:27 AM

Beautiful images and great meter! Loved it! Congratulations!

Kelly Deschler

January 5, 2015 at 12:49 AM

It is a mystery, how a harsh winter blizzard can leave behind such beauty... The accompanying photo is just as lovely as your poem. Very nice work, Debbie!

Poet Destroyer A

January 4, 2015 at 5:36 PM

Nette, , Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards

January 4, 2015 at 5:22 PM

And the perfect match is the picture you chose !! What a delight to the eye this is ! Congratulations, dear Deb....and Happy New Year. May the light and love come to you and yours ! :)

Jan Allison

January 4, 2015 at 4:01 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

January 4, 2015 at 3:13 PM

Hi Debbie, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem. Great imagery. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2015 at 2:28 PM

Oh, now I can see the lovely picture that accompanies this gem!! I'm glad I put it in the top three. Congrats, Deb, you did a beautiful job.

Paul Callus

January 4, 2015 at 7:30 AM

This is both December and Guzzi magic! I love it! A 7 rating for you. Well done! // paul

Paul Callus

January 4, 2015 at 2:49 PM

...back once more with deserved congrats, Debbie! Well done! // paul

Liam Mcdaid

January 4, 2015 at 2:03 AM

beautifully painted debbie excellent pen

Matthew Anish

January 3, 2015 at 10:02 PM

What a beautiful photo. Have you considered entering the NWF photo contest. What does "gelid" mean? I have never heard that word before? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Guzzi

January 3, 2015 at 10:07 PM

no my photo Matt - gelid - frosty

James Marshall Goff

January 3, 2015 at 7:37 PM

Perfect use of a word I had to look up! love that! yes...magic is everywhere...very clean, in the style of Sandburg, but you...jmg

Debra Squyres

January 3, 2015 at 4:26 PM

I see this so vividly as it is so well crafted. Admiration for your pen !!

Robert Lindley

January 3, 2015 at 12:11 PM

This inspired write packs a huge punch! Love the bird's view and frosty image evoked.. Adding this to my fav list as its a truly great Quintain.... Very magic super 7 on this one... Thanks

Eve Roper

January 3, 2015 at 10:37 AM

Debbie, good write, I loved to hear the sound the frost crisped lawn makes when you walk on it.

Sara Kendrick

January 3, 2015 at 3:34 AM

Very expressive and descriptive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Very selective wording increases its interest.Thanks for the visit to my page..May your New Year hold enchanting delight for you and your loved ones..Sara