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Frost crisped, the lawn remained beneath the frozen dew. Water dripped to ice as gutters drained. The cardinal bids the day adieu; the winter storm has left a gelid view.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/8/2018 8:35:00 PM
Fine seasonal poem. What does gelid mean? I have been published in the NY Times. Also, I remember what you wrote about there being some good people out there. In light of recent events my faith in that has been a bit shattered. Also a great nature photo! I wish the best of the season to you and yours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/9/2018 2:43:00 PM
very impressive getting into the NY Times!!!! Happy Holy Days Matt
Date: 7/28/2017 4:30:00 PM
beautiful imagery, Debbie, leaving a slight chill ~*
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Date: 8/21/2015 5:15:00 PM
Enjoyed this quintaine example! Excellent expression and imagery
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Date: 1/16/2015 9:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 1/10/2015 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. Another beautiful write enjoyed... Verlena
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Date: 1/7/2015 8:27:00 AM
Beautiful images and great meter! Loved it! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/5/2015 12:49:00 AM
It is a mystery, how a harsh winter blizzard can leave behind such beauty... The accompanying photo is just as lovely as your poem. Very nice work, Debbie!
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Date: 1/4/2015 5:36:00 PM
Nette, , Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2015 5:22:00 PM
And the perfect match is the picture you chose !! What a delight to the eye this is ! Congratulations, dear Deb....and Happy New Year. May the light and love come to you and yours ! :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 4:01:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2015 3:13:00 PM
Hi Debbie, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem. Great imagery. Sandra
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:28:00 PM
Oh, now I can see the lovely picture that accompanies this gem!! I'm glad I put it in the top three. Congrats, Deb, you did a beautiful job.
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:30:00 AM
This is both December and Guzzi magic! I love it! A 7 rating for you. Well done! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2015 2:49:00 PM
...back once more with deserved congrats, Debbie! Well done! // paul
Date: 1/4/2015 2:03:00 AM
beautifully painted debbie excellent pen
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:02:00 PM
What a beautiful photo. Have you considered entering the NWF photo contest. What does "gelid" mean? I have never heard that word before? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/3/2015 10:07:00 PM
no my photo Matt - gelid - frosty
Date: 1/3/2015 7:37:00 PM
Perfect use of a word I had to look up! love that! yes...magic is everywhere...very clean, in the style of Sandburg, but you...jmg
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:26:00 PM
I see this so vividly as it is so well crafted. Admiration for your pen !!
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:11:00 PM
This inspired write packs a huge punch! Love the bird's view and frosty image evoked.. Adding this to my fav list as its a truly great Quintain.... Very magic super 7 on this one... Thanks
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:37:00 AM
Debbie, good write, I loved to hear the sound the frost crisped lawn makes when you walk on it.
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Date: 1/3/2015 3:34:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Very selective wording increases its interest.Thanks for the visit to my page..May your New Year hold enchanting delight for you and your loved ones..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:36:00 PM
This is super Debbie,only great mind like you can produce this,no doubt Guzzi is Guru,kudos and goodluck in the contest my friend...huggs
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Date: 1/1/2015 8:12:00 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery Debbie - good luck in the contest i see this placing very highly:-) Hugs Jan xx
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