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December Magic

luminescent snow

    dressed in pewter, tulle, moonshine

          chilling the rooftop

    as December magic warms

          ... long shivers of twilight's kiss




Andrea Dietrich’s A Quintain Christmas Contest
12/28/2014

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Roy Jerden Date: 1/7/2015 8:15:00 AM Beautiful language, as always... Congratulations, Nette! Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 1/5/2015 5:18:00 AM translucent with light Nette congrats on win hugs Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 1/4/2015 9:50:00 PM Congrats on the win Nette, the "luminescent snow" conjured up the cold full moon in a frigid sky. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/4/2015 7:02:00 PM ahhh tulle! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/4/2015 5:34:00 PM Nette, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/4/2015 5:14:00 PM Ohhh love the "dressed in pewter, tulle, moonshine "..... indeed if that isn't December magic itself !! So lovely, Nette! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/4/2015 3:55:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan x Login to Reply

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 1/4/2015 3:35:00 PM congratulations Nette on this fine poem and win Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 1/4/2015 3:03:00 PM Nette, congratulations on your great win for your lovely December Magic poem. Your words were indeed magical! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/4/2015 2:58:00 PM Lovely imagery and a magical feeling it emits! Congratulations on this excellent win, Nette! #7 // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/4/2015 2:23:00 PM Gorgeous, Nette!! Big congrats in my contest. One of the prettiest poems entered. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 12/31/2014 9:19:00 AM A chilling, but beautiful view from the rooftop. Happy New Year, dear friend. Love, daver Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/31/2014 5:42:00 AM Brilliant! Happy New Year, dear Nette! Login to Reply

Norma Arana Date: 12/29/2014 4:07:00 PM The turn of images as this heavenly poem ends is inimitable." Long shivers of twilight's kiss" -- stellar, Nette! Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 12/29/2014 11:04:00 AM Cold and warmth dance in your poem and fill me with desire -- for more of your wonderful words. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/29/2014 8:24:00 AM Simply sublime Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Gary Bateman Date: 12/29/2014 6:48:00 AM A very nice Tanka Nette!! Great imagery. Best of Luck in Andrea's Contest. A "7" from me. Best Holiday Wishes, Gary Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 12/29/2014 5:46:00 AM Excellent pen Nette! I really enjoyed your piece my dearest friend! A 7 from me! I wish you a very Happy New Year! I pray that 2015 brings just the best to you! Have a very lovely day! GL in the contest! :) Love and hugs! xxx D." Login to Reply