Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

December Magic

luminescent snow

    dressed in pewter, tulle, moonshine

          chilling the rooftop

    as December magic warms

          ... long shivers of twilight's kiss




Andrea Dietrich’s A Quintain Christmas Contest
12/28/2014

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Roy Jerden January 7, 2015 at 8:15 AM Beautiful language, as always... Congratulations, Nette!

Shadow Hamilton January 5, 2015 at 5:18 AM translucent with light Nette congrats on win hugs

John Lawless January 4, 2015 at 9:50 PM Congrats on the win Nette, the "luminescent snow" conjured up the cold full moon in a frigid sky.

Debbie Guzzi January 4, 2015 at 7:02 PM ahhh tulle! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A January 4, 2015 at 5:34 PM Nette, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards January 4, 2015 at 5:14 PM Ohhh love the "dressed in pewter, tulle, moonshine "..... indeed if that isn't December magic itself !! So lovely, Nette!

Jan Allison January 4, 2015 at 3:55 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan x

Robert Stoner Jr January 4, 2015 at 3:35 PM congratulations Nette on this fine poem and win

Sandra Haight January 4, 2015 at 3:03 PM Nette, congratulations on your great win for your lovely December Magic poem. Your words were indeed magical! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus January 4, 2015 at 2:58 PM Lovely imagery and a magical feeling it emits! Congratulations on this excellent win, Nette! #7 // paul

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2015 at 2:23 PM Gorgeous, Nette!! Big congrats in my contest. One of the prettiest poems entered.

Daver Austin December 31, 2014 at 9:19 AM A chilling, but beautiful view from the rooftop. Happy New Year, dear friend. Love, daver

Demetrios Trifiatis December 31, 2014 at 5:42 AM Brilliant! Happy New Year, dear Nette!

Norma Arana December 29, 2014 at 4:07 PM The turn of images as this heavenly poem ends is inimitable." Long shivers of twilight's kiss" -- stellar, Nette!

David Meade December 29, 2014 at 11:04 AM Cold and warmth dance in your poem and fill me with desire -- for more of your wonderful words.

Jan Allison December 29, 2014 at 8:24 AM Simply sublime Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Gary Bateman December 29, 2014 at 6:48 AM A very nice Tanka Nette!! Great imagery. Best of Luck in Andrea's Contest. A "7" from me. Best Holiday Wishes, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter December 29, 2014 at 5:46 AM Excellent pen Nette! I really enjoyed your piece my dearest friend! A 7 from me! I wish you a very Happy New Year! I pray that 2015 brings just the best to you! Have a very lovely day! GL in the contest! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."