Notes About The Poem


 

December Dawn ---Nightime Musings

My eyes wander, where window gazing, finds the crescent moon rifting the darkness, and against it's light a magnolia branch is stenciled, black and keen Three stars are tangled in the topmost bough... And because deep loveliness is there, I turn to you... The profile on the pillow is that boy from long ago I love watching you, lashes fluttering, and an almost smile What are you dreaming, my love? How could one explain That love like this exists Before coffee, on a December dawn, in a shadowed room?
_______________________________________________________________ Contest: Nightime Musings.....sponsored by FJ Thomas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Inman Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Carrie, what a truly beautiful write. It has a very personal and dreamy feel to it.
Godwin Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Enchanting, so enchanting - I loved it ... CayCay
A  Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 6:03 PM
CARRIE... NICE WIN...SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 1:15 AM
Loved ur very sweet images Carrie.. congrats on big win!
Delaney Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Love the image of the stenciled magnolia branch. A beautiful intimate moment forever stenciled upon our minds. Congratulations, SuZ
Gentry Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your win with this incredible poem!
Wigley Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Simply lovely, Carrie, well done. And all the best for 2016 to you and yours. Viv x
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 4:46 PM
so beautiful. A very well deserved win, Carrie. Congratulations.
Haight Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 4:40 PM
A lovely poem, Carrie. So full of the mystery that defines love. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Those "LUCKY ME" moments Carrie. Congrats on your placement
Callus Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 2:11 PM
This is a delight to read, Carrie! Sweet musing at dawn of day! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win. ~ Wishing you all the best for 2016. ~ Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Wow Carrie this is so beautiful congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:33 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 8:47 PM
Carrie, congrats on your win with this beautiful poem! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Song Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 8:09 PM
You framed a poetic scene just from looking outside your morning window! Congrats on this win, Carrie! WOW! Gwendolen
Taylor Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Salama  Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Very nice Carrie! Congratulations on your win! :)
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations Carrie xx
Bauer Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 4:04 AM
this is very lovely! congrats on your win!
Williams Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 3:49 AM
carrie congrats on your win, very romantic..David
Sivey Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 7:02 PM
This is a remarkable write my friend! I really enjoyed this fine poem that you have written! What a marvelous and delightful write! Great Work!!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace