Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Couplet

Deceit

Deceit





As SILVER moon beguiles to SLIVER my heart,
Its light reflects silently on my lifeless face,
Chills of the night give me a frigid embrace,
Simmering serene soul struggles seeking solace !




Written Dec 19th, 2015
For contest- 4 lines
By Silent one

Awarded 2nd place win

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Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 7:29 AM Excellent! Congratulations on win! Love the last line.

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 7:19 AM Congratulations on this most deserved win, Upma! A lovely entry. ** All the best. *** paul

Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:58 AM Congratulations Dr, Sharma.

John Lawless December 20, 2015 at 9:40 PM Congrats on your placement in the contest

Janice Canerdy December 20, 2015 at 9:11 PM Congratulations on your win, Upma. Janice

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:24 PM I really like this one from you , Upma. I think serene kind of goes against the word simmering. Other than that, I thought it was EXCELLENT. Congrats. Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:03 AM Thnx Andrea for ur thoughful remarks... I meant simmering for an otherwise serene soul ..

Richard Lamoureux December 20, 2015 at 6:56 PM I see this is a winner Upma, congrats.

Balveen Cheema December 20, 2015 at 5:52 PM Beatifully expressed Upma! Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:45 PM dr. umpa, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 11:51 AM Very nice congrats on your placement!

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:22 AM DR.UMPA, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2015 at 1:50 PM - Well done, great poem Dr. Upma - Luck in contest - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)