Decant Your Heart To Breathe

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Pour your heart out, let it flow. Like a river's torrent, let it go. On your bare arms let it glow. Let its rhythmic pulse show, that you really, truly, deeply can bestow pure, stark, emboldened emotions all aglow. With heart exposed, a sleeve gateau.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 8/27/2023 2:39:00 PM

A great monorhyme John that says so much in the few lines. Very poetic with great flow and impact. Love the title and last line in particular. As Hiya so beautifully put, it is great, thoughtful wordplay. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

John Anderson
Date: 8/27/2023 2:57:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your kind feedback. Cheers and Best Wishes

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/27/2023 12:39:00 AM

The rhymes are flowing in a resplendent way with such meticulously crafted wordplay, with a deep insight of letting the heart experience its true emotions and find its unique rhythm to vibrate in heartbeats.. Gorgeous..

John Anderson
Date: 8/27/2023 10:11:00 AM

WOW thanks very much for your comment. Cheers and Best Wishes