Decaf Emotions

I remember when mornings meant coffee, photographic caffeinated displays Kind of silly really if you think about it, but it meant so very much to me I can still hear it dripping, smell the aroma wafting through the office, feel the anticipation building inside, but that is all the remains, where once A daily greeting, no touching, no voices, simple written wishes brought about a smile Allowing my day to begin with happiness, knowing someone (you) were thinking about me Now all I find is a blank screen, electronically flickering on my frowning face Like a cold cup of sorrow filled to the brim, brewed in empty pots of decaf emotions Vacant, staring…unlike the words I rehearse each lonely evening (just in case) For my dreams still pour of only you, spilling from the dark roasted cracks in my heart I remember when mornings meant coffee… now all I find are grounds for sadness
Written for the Wake Up With Coffee Or Tea Contest – poetry contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/11/2016 10:24:00 PM
Hi Chris, What a good write and title. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thanks so very much Alexis. Coffee is a subject I am well versed on. : )
Date: 12/11/2016 4:57:00 PM
Chris, my favorite lines were the last two! Congrats and thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 12/12/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim. I am thrilled you liked this one and thank you for sponsoring this wonderful contest. .
Date: 11/30/2016 9:07:00 PM
The title grabbed me....Decaf Emotions....brilliant word play . Beautifully written and the last couplet, again....brilliant word play. If this ain't on the top some one needs a new percolator.
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Date: 12/1/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I appreciate your visit and comment. Coffee somehow always provides a certain inspiration for me.
Date: 11/30/2016 2:40:00 PM
Decaf is an abomination! lol Wonderful deep poem, Chris. I love the contrast of something as simple as coffee and something as complicated as emotion.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Christy, there is a actual back story to this but it really would seem silly. Your kindness is always warm and appreciated.
Date: 11/30/2016 1:30:00 PM
decaf sad for sure!
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Date: 11/30/2016 1:59:00 PM
Really, it should be outlawed, both sadness and decaf. :) Thanks for stopping by James
Date: 11/30/2016 1:29:00 PM
Oh so it seems after those days ..maybe years of scented coffee aroma...and presence of She..Now only lemom tea might be in waitimg :) ..You brought me nostalgia..of my days at at work with friends...Behind the screen with some coffee..hard work..and a chat in between..I do miss those days..I can so relate to this...Christmas days are the worst reminders...Great poem.
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Date: 11/30/2016 1:58:00 PM
Thank you always sweet Charmaine for your nice comments and wonderful thoughts shared with me. I am always grateful when you stop by and leave such nice words for me.
Date: 11/30/2016 1:23:00 PM
Well done! A cup of sadness creatively expressed. You did a fine job with this contest and wrote each line with your own heart - I felt it ... CayCay
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Date: 11/30/2016 1:56:00 PM
Your kindness is overwhelming my sweet friend. Thank you so very much.
Date: 11/30/2016 12:37:00 PM
This is really good... sad yes... but so creative, and many great lines and word-play.. very clever... I love your style.
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Date: 11/30/2016 1:56:00 PM
I always appreciate your visits to my poetry Rebecca. Your kind words are always a gift to me.
Date: 11/30/2016 9:48:00 AM
The commenters below have it perfectly - a sinuous wrapping of the reader in the sad air, the sense of loss. So many great lines in this poem.
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Date: 11/30/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Doug. I'm glad the emotions I intended have found their way out there.
Date: 11/30/2016 9:27:00 AM
That is so sad..I love your art Chris. but this one makes me want to cry....richly written about feeling emptiness. .oh my.
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Date: 11/30/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Yep, it seems I can sure pour it on when it is about sadness...wow, that sucks. :) Thanks again Holly, I appreciate your visits to my poetry always.
Date: 11/30/2016 9:13:00 AM
I agree with Heidi, very well done Chris! G/L in the contest!:)
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Date: 11/30/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Cheryl. I appreciate your kind thoughts today
Date: 11/30/2016 9:04:00 AM
Wow this is a good one Chris! I can feel the emotions. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 11/30/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you could feel this one, that mean I accomplished my writing goal. But now it is time to smile again. :)
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