Dec 11 birthday Senryu

brown baby born breach 
in nineteen sixty seven 
I’m a year older
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Harp Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 4:10 PM
Yes, 1967 must have been a good year, under the sign of POETESS (if there is such a sign). Good senryu, Karen.
Jones Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 1:01 AM
What a nice comment and idea! You are so inspiring thanks Moon Harp!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 4:06 PM
Love the juxtaposition…the position not ideal but(t) nonetheless 1967 brought forth a great poet! Happy Birthday!
Jones Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 4:26 PM
You are kind Kim! Thanks!
Read Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Hi Karen, wishing you a happy birthday, hope you receive all you wish for. xx
Jones Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Aw thank you John!
Tor Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Karen my Dear so sorry I missed your Special day of birth. A birthday wish I have for you, may all your wishes all come true. A hug and good fortune will find you soon. If not by daybreak by afternoon. God bless you Karen on your birthday... Happy Birthday....
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 8:25 PM
No my birthday is December 11 so you are not late my poem was early lol. Thanks Michael.
Alhemaidy Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Happy birthday dear Karen!
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Abdullah thank you!
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December 9, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Happy Birthday to you, have a wonderful day… Beryl
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 11:07 AM
Thanks Beryl!
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 6:52 AM
Very sweet. Happy birthday to you!!!
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Andrea! Hugs
Brul Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 12:20 AM
Awww, this is so cute!! Love the simplicity of execution. Happy birthday Karen. Warm wishes on the way. ^__^ JCB
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 12:25 AM
Jcb thanks so much!
Cunningham Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:48 PM
A very happy birthday to you Karen. I hope you have a lovely day. Tom
Jones Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:52 PM
Aw thanks dear poet!
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