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Dec 11 birthday Senryu

brown baby born breach in nineteen sixty seven I’m a year older

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Date: 1/2/2025 4:10:00 PM
Yes, 1967 must have been a good year, under the sign of POETESS (if there is such a sign). Good senryu, Karen.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/3/2025 1:01:00 AM
What a nice comment and idea! You are so inspiring thanks Moon Harp!
Date: 12/10/2024 4:06:00 PM
Love the juxtaposition…the position not ideal but(t) nonetheless 1967 brought forth a great poet! Happy Birthday!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/10/2024 4:26:00 PM
You are kind Kim! Thanks!
Date: 12/10/2024 8:36:00 AM
Hi Karen, wishing you a happy birthday, hope you receive all you wish for. xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/10/2024 8:53:00 AM
Aw thank you John!
Date: 12/9/2024 6:38:00 PM
Karen my Dear so sorry I missed your Special day of birth. A birthday wish I have for you, may all your wishes all come true. A hug and good fortune will find you soon. If not by daybreak by afternoon. God bless you Karen on your birthday... Happy Birthday....
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 8:25:00 PM
No my birthday is December 11 so you are not late my poem was early lol. Thanks Michael.
Date: 12/9/2024 10:50:00 AM
Happy birthday dear Karen!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 11:08:00 AM
Abdullah thank you!
Date: 12/9/2024 10:15:00 AM
Happy Birthday to you, have a wonderful day… Beryl
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Beryl!
Date: 12/9/2024 6:52:00 AM
Very sweet. Happy birthday to you!!!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Hugs
Date: 12/9/2024 12:20:00 AM
Awww, this is so cute!! Love the simplicity of execution. Happy birthday Karen. Warm wishes on the way. ^__^ JCB
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 12:25:00 AM
Jcb thanks so much!
Date: 12/8/2024 11:48:00 PM
A very happy birthday to you Karen. I hope you have a lovely day. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/8/2024 11:52:00 PM
Aw thanks dear poet!

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