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Debut of Spring

DEBUT OF SPRING

     debut of Spring bringing warmth ousting cold and chill with promising soft 
      Sun adorning ambient is great, plentiful abloom blossoms are flushing in 
       fiery flame, glossy luster seems to be season’s claim. romantic aroma in 
      fragrant flowers is pride of Nature, Spring displays colorful cards 
      welcoming mating birds, sharp chirps, sweet tweets, shrill whistles of 
      cheerful birds resonate with rustles of leaves shivered by touch of gentle 
       zephyr. sudden spring gust is chasing pollen dust to spin, swirl and twirl 
      in whirling wind.  In delight, twilight is pasting hues with brilliant 
      shades on sky-album. 
                                                                                              
                                on glorious glow,    
                                     sophistic cardinal show:
                                                 flood in frolic flow.
                                         
             
   03/22/21                            
   
                                                            First Place
 'All Yours (Apr 11)' Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Seeker Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Beautiful Haibun, wrapped up with a melodious haiku! Congrats on your win, Anisha!
Merryman Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 11:22 AM
A lovely, descriptive haibun, Anisha! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Stathakis Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:14 PM
I loved the imagery that you created. Congrats!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Impressive haibun! Love the creative haiku! BW ~ Mala
Dutta Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:45 PM
Thanks Malabika. Love.
Kendrick Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Creative use of poetic techniques in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit with congrats is appreciated. Sara
Dutta Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 9:51 PM
Thanks Sara.Hugs
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