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Death's Tune

10-21-12 -------------------- Rotted corpses play As dead trees disintegrate Lost in their own fog A song that I long to hear Is lost in the obscure fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/16/2012 2:07:00 PM
sounds a little dark, but bittersweet.. at least corpses get to lay in peace, and the spirit & soul is free :) great write Laura, love the creativity^_^ ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:03:00 PM
:o) Fear not my dear..
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Date: 10/23/2012 12:15:00 PM
Wonderful reading your outstanding poetry today Laura. Love, Carol
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