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Death's Minions

I saw a dark mass
A floating dying being
Looking fierce, deadly
Wanting to steal away souls
Hope it’s not looking for me

Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

September 27, 2011 at 6:59 PM

Yes side step em mate ....straight left to the head knock em dead...bring out the plow... to bury fred.. put this in the memories verse just now yes love is sweet but incomplete, without my baby ...thou....to meet....somehow

Tim B

September 26, 2011 at 12:43 PM

Eerie piece Russel, captures the fear of death quite nicely and personifies it in a most frightening manner, I am sure it's not looking for you just yet though old chap :) Great poem.