Death's Footfall

Old age tends to feel like a waiting game when the footfalls of Death start encroaching. And your passion for life dims down its flame, watching life's end stealthily approaching. You start looking back rather than ahead: memories replace dreams of tomorrow. And the years, like an unraveling thread, expose feelings of love, faith, and sorrow. Oddly enough, you don't feel old inside, though time keeps steadfastly ticking away. And setting your qualms about Death aside; faith disregard what nonbelievers say. Old age feels comforting; a well-worn shawl that deadens the sound of Death's footfall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Sharp Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 1:12 AM
A very good metaphor, and a well written piece.
Pinet Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thanks so much Lawrence, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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