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'Cosmic Death' Contest Info
Sponsor Seth Pina
Contest Name Cosmic Death | Enter Contest
Deadline 2/28/2026 12:00:00 AM
02/04/2026

Premiere Contest Winner Deaths Cosmic Mercy

She drifted past the spiral arms in white, A shadow snuffing galaxies to dark. She held the dying pulsars to her breast, Like children, singing chaos into sleep. "Do not be frightened," hummed to worlds of ice, "The dark is velvet-deep, you are not lost." She swept the dust of nations into glass, Preserving lovers' vows before they broke. There is a beauty in the sudden halt, Perfection in the stop, like gravity That waits to catch the ocean in its fall. She severed light from heat, and form from mass, A cold tranquility beneath the storm. So infinite her mercy, grace so strange, She wiped the seat of life from Nature's face. For eons she has walked, the gardener, Who plucks the solar systems like a bloom. She does not take with malice or with hate, She only opens wide the iron door. And now she stands before your yellow sun, To answer with a kiss the final call. You tremble at her silence? Fear the end? You think she brings the night to kill the stars? She weeps to see you breathe, knowing the truth. She is not here to hollow out your soul; She kills you now to save you from the Hunger.
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Hind Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 11:52 PM
This is intense work. Wow, Jami!! A FAV
Patterson Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 2:46 PM
Thank you
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 3:29 AM
Many great lines! Enjoyed the read. … She held the dying pulsars to her breast, Like children, singing chaos into sleep... "The dark is velvet-deep, you are not lost." A side note, my mom would have dreams that she was lost. I love your line. Congrats on your top placement, Jami!
Patterson Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 2:46 PM
Thank you
Pina Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, beautiful imagery. Hope all is well, - Seth
Patterson Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 2:47 PM
Thank you All is good
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 2:49 PM
outstanding imagery at every turn and a totally engaging read...especially liked: She is not here to hollow out your soul; She kills you now to save you from the Hunger. wasn't expecting that ending. very creative
Patterson Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 2:47 PM
Thank you
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