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Deathly Silence

Mind astir in dark shadows, Silence, all asleep, Ears strain for flashes of life, But no, not a beep. Tears roll down my eyes, Unspeakable sorrow drowns words - thoughts face demise. 09/14/17
Contest: Seguidilla Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 10/7/2017 9:23:00 PM
A poignant poem Jo. Belated congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/23/2017 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win it is nicely done, Jo Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 8:08:00 AM
Very touching Jo congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2017 7:30:00 PM
So glad to see this one again high on the list, Jo. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:05:00 PM
Jo, CONGRATULATIONS on your win!
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations Jo Daniel :)
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Date: 9/21/2017 1:59:00 PM
i was pulled by the pensive cadence and mood of this work...thumbs up on your high win, jo...i am grateful you joined..huggs
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Date: 9/17/2017 7:02:00 PM
Beautiful sad poem very nicely rhymed, Jo.
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Date: 9/17/2017 6:21:00 PM
The poem makes me wonder what is this about..That is good work when it creates questions..Thanks for the visit to my blog..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:18:00 PM
Very nice Jo..
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Date: 9/15/2017 10:10:00 AM
Very nicely penned Jo
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Date: 9/14/2017 1:33:00 PM
- Touching and beautifully written, Jo - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2017 11:21:00 AM
Jo, very dramatic, like your poem a lot GL
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Date: 9/14/2017 10:13:00 AM
Well done Jo Daniel! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/14/2017 10:08:00 AM
Wow...very good my friend...nicely penned Jo...a winner already...god bless...^WW^
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