Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Deathly Silence

Mind astir in dark shadows,
Silence, all asleep,
Ears strain for flashes of life,
But no, not a beep.
Tears roll down my eyes,
Unspeakable sorrow drowns
words - thoughts face demise.


09/14/17



Contest: Seguidilla 
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Susan Ashley October 7, 2017 at 9:23 PM A poignant poem Jo. Belated congrats on your win!

Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 9:50 PM Congratulations on your win it is nicely done, Jo Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison September 22, 2017 at 8:08 AM Very touching Jo congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2017 at 7:30 PM So glad to see this one again high on the list, Jo. Big congrats to you.

Constance La France September 21, 2017 at 3:05 PM Jo, CONGRATULATIONS on your win!

Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 3:01 PM Congratulations Jo Daniel :)

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 1:59 PM i was pulled by the pensive cadence and mood of this work...thumbs up on your high win, jo...i am grateful you joined..huggs

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2017 at 7:02 PM Beautiful sad poem very nicely rhymed, Jo.

Sara Kendrick September 17, 2017 at 6:21 PM The poem makes me wonder what is this about..That is good work when it creates questions..Thanks for the visit to my blog..Sara

Silent One September 16, 2017 at 4:18 PM Very nice Jo..

Joseph May September 15, 2017 at 10:10 AM Very nicely penned Jo

Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2017 at 1:33 PM - Touching and beautifully written, Jo - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France September 14, 2017 at 11:21 AM Jo, very dramatic, like your poem a lot GL

Heidi Sands September 14, 2017 at 10:13 AM Well done Jo Daniel! Good luck in the contest :)

Winged Warrior September 14, 2017 at 10:08 AM Wow...very good my friend...nicely penned Jo...a winner already...god bless...^WW^