Deathbed Discourse

This past week I lost two good friends. The one friend I lost to cancer. The poor guy
suffered horribly. All through his ordeal his wife was by his bedside. I began to reflect
on this and I tried to put myself in his place. What would I say? What would I think
knowing I was about to die? Shortly after I composed this sonnet.

Weep no tears for me at this time and place.
A thousand eyes change not my destiny.
All living things must die eventually
Except my love for you, which I embrace.
Feel not sad for me looking at my face
Although it's old and wrinkled you can see
A budding rose should age so gracefully.
My time grows near my love; in any case
Your life goes on nevertheless my love.
So wipe those eyes dry of life's mournful dew
And think not this time undeserving of.
Life had been kind, more so, finding you.
A lifelong companion envied above
By angels and cherubs alike. Adieu!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Night Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 5:41 PM
i fav'd it
Ahearn Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 11:23 AM
You flatter me Chris. Thanks for commenting.
Night Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 5:40 PM
great job albert this poem is amazing i wonder what i will say b4 i die
Ahearn Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 11:29 AM
I know what I'd say," I don't want to die"...just kidding; one thing though, I don't want to die a coward. Thanks again for commenting.
Roske Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 9:41 AM
a beautiful tribute - I lost my uncle this week to cancer too. This touched my soul.
Ahearn Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 9:59 PM
I am sorry for your loss Ann, losing a family member is always a painful experience.
Austin Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Touching, Brian. Congrats on the selection. daver
Ahearn Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 9:54 PM
Thank you daver.
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