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Death Where Are You

Fraught, distressed, my love forlorn! Ripped to shreds, my emotions torn! Without you, I rue the day I was born! Death where are you? I seek solitude, make the wilderness mine. My love lost to one so out of line. Breathless, love can be so unkind! Death where are you? I wander into unknown places forsaken Will my heart heal, once unkindly taken? Misused, abused, I am totally shaken! Death where are you? My destiny now to wander this wilderness. Do I still love that faithless lass? Oh yes! My brain is mushed, my life a cruel mess! Death where are you? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 5/12/18 Rhyme and Refrain - Poetry Contest sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 6/2/2018 6:28:00 PM
Well done, Mick. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:56:00 AM
Forsaken love, so cruel and painful. Nice write Mick.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/20/2018 3:31:00 AM
Deleted your duplicated comment.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/20/2018 3:30:00 AM
Thank you James, appreciate your comment. Mick
Date: 5/15/2018 2:38:00 PM
Mick, congratulations on your win in my contest, oh yes love can be cruel, well done ~
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/15/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, it is an honour and fun to be placed in a contest, thanks again. Mick
Date: 5/15/2018 1:50:00 AM
Lovely flow, really enjoyed this one. Felt real and natural. Congrats. V
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/15/2018 10:37:00 PM
Thanking you most kindly Virginia. Mick
Date: 5/14/2018 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written rhyme and rhythm, an emotional write.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/14/2018 9:09:00 PM
Many Thanks, Susan, appreciated. Mick
Date: 5/14/2018 3:50:00 PM
Excellent piece with great rhyming scheme! Congratulations, Mick, on your win! Hugs. Pandita
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/14/2018 9:07:00 PM
Thanks, Pandita, your kind word most appreciated. hugs Mick
Date: 5/12/2018 2:40:00 AM
Great verse Mick, brilliantly done. Good luck. Tom.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/12/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, fingers crossed. Mick

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