Death When Descends
Slowly descends pall of death
And dies the old faith,
Life gasps for last of life-breath,
Where a green meadow
Once was, rules death’s dark shadow.
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Tanka |31.05.2021|
Poet’s note: After a long, long time I had visited my old village. And what I saw caused me a shock. The green hillocks around had turned barren showing grey rocks. What ere a verdant valley was had nigh but gone, nearby meadows no less grey. Like all Tanka poems, this one has five lines, but the syllables are in different order: 7/5/7/5/7 in place of the usual 5/7/5/7/7.
Copyright © Aniruddha Pathak | Year Posted 2022
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