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Death, Wait Your Turn

When she was young, she seldom thought of Death. He’d have no claim to her for years to come. Life was her ladder. As she reached each rung, success and joy obscured the simple truth, that Death someday would have his promised turn. ************************* Her steps are very slow; her vision, dim. Death’s whispers in her mind are loud today. She doesn’t fear the end because she knows her soul is covered by the blood of Christ. A life well-lived ends with a pleasant smile.

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Date: 1/22/2025 12:44:00 PM
This is outstanding , janice. A fave for me.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/22/2025 7:40:00 PM
Thanks a MILLION, Andrea! Janice
Date: 1/22/2025 11:18:00 AM
The last line speaks volumes and is so true and profound! Your words flow in such a soulful manner and youv written one that is truly moving! I love what youv delivered here. So descriptive and I especially love the line “ Life was her ladder. As she reached each rung, success and joy obscured the simple truth,” this is what we see many times! So much wisdom in your well articulated lines! Pleasure reading you today dear janice! Sending you light always
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Date: 1/21/2025 4:47:00 AM
Very nice! What is important in the end? We must all ask ourselves.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/21/2025 7:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
Date: 1/20/2025 10:51:00 PM
Well said. Hope overcomes death and Christ is our hope.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/21/2025 7:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Oliver. Janice

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