Death Vision

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I had this vision in 2007 after my chemo and radiation treaments were completed. I left out some detail in order not to make it so long. I wrote another poem titled My Most Awesome Paranormal Experience in 2010 that explains a lot more of what I experienced. This is one experience that I haven't been able to forget.

Deep sleep wrapped me in its majestic arms tight. Hold thrust me into a darkened hole quite vast. Ambling forward, I see a faint pinhole light, luminosity enhances view to last. Finally, shaft opened up to beauty bright, and not once did dark feelings take me aghast. He towered on a modest, small, grassy mound. Overpowering peace - calm was all around. Brilliant white glow surrounded His hooded frame. A radiant halo crowned His covered head. Who was He? He did not offer me His name. What He did next was all I needed instead. Through our minds, He spoke words to lastly proclaim, That it was not my time; is all He had said. Elevating His arms away from each side, My eyes opened, yet certain I must have died. 06/19/24

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