Death Valley

Dusty hot crystals
lie layered through eons past
breathless dinosaur.

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Caryl Muzzey

March 18, 2009 at 10:43 AM

Very nice. I love reading a good Haiku, thank you for sharing. Also thank you for finding a misspelling on mine that no one has ever noticed, I always read it right. Caryl

December 1, 2008 at 11:52 AM

The imagery works well in this one. I wasn't expecting the last line. Nice surprise! Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Christopher Higgins

November 20, 2008 at 4:11 PM

Excellent Haiku Sue. I have read this one a few times and I amazed at your work. You cover much territory in your poems.

Barbara Gorelick

November 20, 2008 at 6:24 AM

I love the breathless dinosaur...great use of words...My favorite form..the haiku.

Sharon Winter

November 20, 2008 at 6:11 AM

Awesome haiku and hilarious comments! Bet you didn't expect that! Or did you? : ) Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

November 20, 2008 at 3:10 AM

man, listen to those chuckle-heads beneath me. lol HA! anyway, this is very original and clear, i love it. the last line is killer - literally. :) Kristin