Death Valley

Dusty hot crystals
lie layered through eons past
breathless dinosaur.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/18/2009 10:43:00 AM
Very nice. I love reading a good Haiku, thank you for sharing. Also thank you for finding a misspelling on mine that no one has ever noticed, I always read it right. Caryl
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Date: 12/1/2008 11:52:00 AM
The imagery works well in this one. I wasn't expecting the last line. Nice surprise! Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/20/2008 4:11:00 PM
Excellent Haiku Sue. I have read this one a few times and I amazed at your work. You cover much territory in your poems.
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Date: 11/20/2008 6:24:00 AM
I love the breathless dinosaur...great use of words...My favorite form..the haiku.
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Date: 11/20/2008 6:11:00 AM
Awesome haiku and hilarious comments! Bet you didn't expect that! Or did you? : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 11/20/2008 3:10:00 AM
man, listen to those chuckle-heads beneath me. lol HA! anyway, this is very original and clear, i love it. the last line is killer - literally. :) Kristin
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Date: 11/19/2008 11:19:00 PM
Excellent and clever Haiku, Sue. Great imagery again. Love, Nigel
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Date: 11/19/2008 10:55:00 PM
Your Jurassic classic , Sue , in perfect format ...
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