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Death Train

We’re all waiting on the death train

To take us all away

Some will kick and scream

Some will merely say

Where does the death train go to

Is it a journey of despair

The million-dollar question

Nobody really cares

All aboard the death train

The ticket is totally free

The conductor will point to the sign

You won't return at three

The track is never ending

Your life you’ll get to see

The answer you always searched for

Will be revealed right after three

The door is finally opened

The platform sets you free

You see the sign before you

To be or not to be

The answer was the question

The conductor says with glee

All aboard the death train

Stopping just to see

Life's unanswered question

You never got to see

Revealed at the very end

Just as the clock struck three.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 11/7/2024 7:46:00 AM
Hey Paul, whether we scream, care, afraid or accept we all board the death train. A fact of life which most delay, if they can. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/7/2024 10:40:00 AM
I myself being eternal will be giving it a miss. lol
Date: 10/31/2024 8:59:00 AM
"Nobody really cares." At least in a metaphysical life. Nice one Paul! :)
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/31/2024 9:15:00 AM
I'm googling, metaphysical.
Date: 10/30/2024 4:02:00 PM
Trains are frightening for obvious reasons.
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/31/2024 9:16:00 AM
Especially when they don't turn up.
Date: 10/30/2024 12:21:00 PM
Deep and wise write this is, made me think , i wonder too where does the death train take us, i hope not a journey of despair as life train itself is a journey of despair! Love the way youv written this dear Paul. So many questions not many answers. Sending you light always
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/31/2024 9:19:00 AM
If it's a British train, it won't be going far, but it will cost a fortune to get there.

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