Death Throws

It's four a.m. you are sound asleep
when you are awakened suddenly
at first it is a small vibration, then 
turns into a house shaking event

You scramble to find purchase on the floor
but you can't seem to find balance
you hear the crashing of pictures
as they fall from the wall to the tile below

As you bounce from wall to wall, frantic
you try to reach your children, who are now
Screaming for you in high pitched madness
as a crack forms in the wall, then the floor

The shaking, now so violent, the sound
so terrifyingly loud, you reach them
only to find a jammed door, you shoulder
it open, grab your children, Now,

How do we get out? wheres my wife?
you stumble down the stairs, half of which
are now broken, to find that the front door
is gone, so is the living room, decimated

Where's my wife? where's the dog?
You are now outside where you fall
the violence is all around you, devistation
beyond the imagination, though it is dark

Where's my wife? my dog? I have the kids
Suddenly the house collapses into itself
then as soon as it began, it ends
Where's my Wife? my dog.

You succumb to your fear, hold your children
so tightly, you fear they might just slip away
as the sun rises to the east, it is clouded by dust
you can now see the chaos that is ahead of you

Everything gone, the house, the car
neighbors who are alive are lost, screaming
their property gone, all of it, just like yours
Where's my Wife, Where's my dog?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/10/2010 4:47:00 PM
This write left me quaking in my shoes, great imagery. Thanks for the comment on Captured Souls
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:52:00 PM
A powerful reality check here Richard. Almost a meditation of sorts ..empathetic and live write. We need to think about these things in this manner to better appreciate and understand people's plight. Well done and I expected nothing lless from you.-Robert
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Date: 3/5/2010 7:34:00 AM
Taz, this is an exceptional write! A poignant reminder of the times we are living in. All would do well to be ready because it can occur anywhere, any time. But how do you prepare for something like this???...Very scary! Very good job-well-written, fantastic imagery, perfect flow...a mini movie!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/4/2010 4:01:00 PM
Its happening all too frequently too Taz and a great write about the upheavals of natural disasters... your words are so brilliantly versed... enjoyed your gifted poetry tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/4/2010 1:26:00 PM
wow, vividly portrayed, Richard. I sure enjoy your writing! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/4/2010 1:05:00 PM
So well described and devastating. I'm so glad I've never been through it. Hope you haven't either. Susan
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Date: 3/4/2010 11:39:00 AM
I do hope this is fiction in your life ...Yet this happened In Chile,In Haiti,In Italy..Heart Wrenching poem,Hope we never experience this situation,good poem indeed..Mr Pickett--Charma
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