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Death Spare Life Till Dawn

Has my life’s essence come to pass? Each breath is taken to be a minute's last Momentary memories to an hour glass Are counting sands in my jagged past Exhausting to count in humanity's hands As time ticks, life's melodic dance As the human race lead an awkward pace Have I outlived my life's race? To chase the illusion of the next stage Called capital; cash; chink or coinage The grim reaper puts these dreams sleeper ‘cause silence is evidence of this creeper Now consider, this song not as a remedy But a strategy to let men for tells the tragedy With so much life we mourn, Death spare life till dawn…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/31/2018 3:02:00 PM
Congrats Siza, much enjoyed
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 2/5/2018 5:46:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/31/2018 2:43:00 PM
Congrats, Siza, on your powerful winner of a poem. Superbly done.
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 2/5/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/31/2018 12:43:00 PM
Awesome write, Siza, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 2/5/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/22/2013 12:19:00 AM
and yet another for people to die. good poem
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 5/22/2013 1:56:00 AM
Hi Nato, Why do you say that?
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 5/22/2013 1:54:00 AM
thanks
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/22/2013 12:20:00 AM
and yet another way for people to die**

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