Death Spare Life Till Dawn

Has my life’s essence come to pass? Each breath is taken to be a minute's last Momentary memories to an hour glass Are counting sands in my jagged past Exhausting to count in humanity's hands As time ticks, life's melodic dance As the human race lead an awkward pace Have I outlived my life's race? To chase the illusion of the next stage Called capital; cash; chink or coinage The grim reaper puts these dreams sleeper ‘cause silence is evidence of this creeper Now consider, this song not as a remedy But a strategy to let men for tells the tragedy With so much life we mourn, Death spare life till dawn…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Smith Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Congrats Siza, much enjoyed
Sibiya Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 5:46 AM
Thank you.
Gauthier Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Congrats, Siza, on your powerful winner of a poem. Superbly done.
Sibiya Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Thank you.
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Awesome write, Siza, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Sibiya Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Thank you.
Calubiran Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 12:19 AM
and yet another for people to die. good poem
Sibiya Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 1:56 AM
Hi Nato, Why do you say that?
Sibiya Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 1:54 AM
thanks
Calubiran Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 12:20 AM
and yet another way for people to die**
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