Death Revisited

I dreamed again of your demise,
Saw you laying there before my eyes;
I relived my grief and asked God,
Is there to be no relief from the memory
Of your pain...
Must it haunt me over and over again.

Cynthia

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/7/2012 8:06:00 AM
you pain cuts deep,sometimes we need to get things out of our system,think you should talk to someone,I mean really talk to someone,cry a little it helps,speaking from experience,sad write Cynthia
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Cynthia Alvez
Date: 9/7/2012 10:03:00 AM
Richard, Thank you for your comment...So thoughtful of you. This is a VERY old poem actually and I really am laughing again. This poem was written when I was first widowed, long ago. At that time I wrote a thousand sad poems or "songs" as I call them. Cynthia
Date: 9/7/2012 1:03:00 AM
Cynthia, the expression of your anguish in this piece, rises off the page with your words. X Peace Ruby
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Date: 9/7/2012 10:04:00 AM
Ruby, it was a time of great sadness. Thank you for your comment... Cynthia
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