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Death Partner

Something slower than snails More powerful than nuclear bomb. The flame that eats out, leisurely Not like what reduce to ash, on pyre. Intentions unknown but desire clear. Dressed in different garbs: tempting. Undress it: seducing. Taste it and go in a maze. Elixir fills the airbags. Settle there: an assassin in the body. Time it seeks: to strike dead. Make silent exit: through the nostrils. Mission accomplished. Ah! it was blissful feeling you. Just one more time...one puff!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/11/2016 2:01:00 PM
- Sunita a great poem .... love the end line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/12/2016 5:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 6/9/2016 1:00:00 PM
Wonderful, it keep the mystery till the end, well penned :)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/11/2016 12:35:00 AM
Thanks. Glad you like it!:)
Date: 6/4/2016 12:22:00 AM
Sunita, this is very good... SKAT
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/5/2016 7:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot SKAT. I'm glad you like it.:)

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