Death of Kafka

I am lying in bed
a dark room, blinded light
I feel like I am dying
I want to drink water while I am dying
the way a lilac does until its final end.
My past is creeping by
some memories are sweet, sweet like apricots
sun ripped 
some are bitter, bitter like the childhood
of an unloved boy.
All my lovers there, I can see their faces,
pale shades , shadows in their swollen eyes.
My father is standing by my side,
caressing my palms, his pride is melting by.
I am closing my eyes
death is very near, I hear silence of its whisper.
Never imagined death 
will be sweeter than life.
I am gasping in fragrance , I am drowning in dimming light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 21, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Nirode, I'm a little late:(. However, this is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 8, 2014 at 12:35 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Nirode - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ray Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Anne for your warm welcome. I am also very happy to be the part of the "soup family".
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November 7, 2014 at 7:14 PM
Ray, A quite beautiful, moving, and passionate write!! I enjoyed this one very much. I can almost see Kafka myself from the word picture you've developed. Kafka indeed did have an inner loneliness that few ever penetrated. A "7" from me for sure and a FAV.
Ray Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Hi Gary, Thank you very much for your nice and encouraging words. Recently I visited the Kafka Museum in Prague. That pilgrimage inspired me to write this poem.
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