Death of Crabs

Feet from the beach...
if they were many miles,
aimlessly they die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 10:58 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Andrew
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 1:33 PM
Congrats Andrew on your win in Andrea's contest with this wonderful write.. so expressive and impressive luv... enjoy another victory with a happy weekend ...
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October 8, 2010 at 1:20 PM
How sad to see the crabs, like sea turtles, dying, Andrew. Brilliant haiku! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Congrats on your win in Andrea's contest Andrew :)
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Andrew
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 4:16 AM
I loved the little story you told about the crabs here ,Andrew. Congrats on your #9. LUv, andrea
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September 27, 2010 at 8:12 AM
YOUR HAIKU IS WAY OUT THERE ANDREW, INTERESTING AND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
A   Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 6:46 AM
enjoyed your poem, fearless,..p.d.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 5:39 AM
those crabs can attack you too... kinda scary when you see hundreds of them running along the beach.
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 5:06 AM
A nice haiku for the contest, Andrew
Sapp Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 11:17 PM
I enjoyed this Andrew. Sad, isn't it? Thought of the sea turtles as well.
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